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Post by Revolver on Aug 15, 2003 6:06:29 GMT
Thanks to Sun King & Number Nine that I have joined. "Revolver" to me is to have returned, and so to the aspiring 'katio' i would humbly submit this:
"Through the night in frosted shades, The wind across branches-- Breaking between clouds The moon rises-- Another day.
On the water midnight shines As resolving shores to a wishing well-- The wave that was sent to greet you there Never returned.
Desiring not to have interfered, Nor forsake that which might have been, Hope arises to extend the means When sorror fates to a happier cause.
Not to expect within the pose But thinking as fact as said and done, Secrets of self he hides alone Obvisious to all as something known."
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Post by Eggman on Aug 15, 2003 12:22:47 GMT
WELCOME REVOLVER!!!! ;D ;D
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Post by Chris on Aug 15, 2003 13:12:29 GMT
Wow, Revolver - that's DEEP !!! I just wish I knewwhat it means... My daughter is an aspiring poet. I'm going to show your poem to her !!! Welcome to our family !!!! All we need is love... Chris
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Post by SunKing on Aug 17, 2003 10:20:35 GMT
A "vision". Beautiful.
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Post by mrkatio on Aug 17, 2003 10:34:55 GMT
Sigh. Yeah...that's what I want to be able to sound like someday.
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Post by pennylane on Aug 17, 2003 14:05:56 GMT
Beautiful Revolver, just incredible.... ;D Welcome....
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Post by Forum Manager on Aug 18, 2003 0:46:31 GMT
katio, im sure youll be great some day! and revolver, welcome, and great poem. but i dunno how i helped you join?
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